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1st Draft - Indiana Russ1st Draft- Joe McGrory
Story Outline- Jan 26, 2011
The trio wear themselves out trying to get a copy of Raiders of the Lost Ark for Russ, all the while trying to be more discreet and not cause a ghost panic in the living realm in the process.
Gabe, Grant, and Russ are all hanging out by the water tower, actually enjoying each others company. Russ has been playing on the tower, swinging and singing various themes for a while now. Grant's playing along and Gabe is amused by the liveliness of his deceased comrades. He starts getting into it and as Russ is swinging, Gabe chimes in with the Indiana Jones theme, setting Russ into a wild rant about how cool Indy is and how his mom never wanted him to watch it and how he was trying to see it right before he died. This sets Grant on the notion of getting Russ to see Raiders of the Lost Ark to give him new connections with the after life, defying his life and his mothers rule. Gabe agrees, but seeing it
1st Draft - Ghosts Do Things1st Draft- Joe McGrory
Story Outline- Jan 26th , 2011
"Ghosts Do Things"
Grant is trying to get Russ and Gabe to accept their deaths and learn how to use their ghostly abilities. Russ is thrilled by all the excitement of it all, but Gabe can't let go of his earthly-limitations enough to be able to do anything. Frustrated with him, Grant casts Gabe out for a while, where he works things out with his past life.
Seeing Gabe's connection to his past life and ex-girlfriend as a little pathetic, Grant decides to do the two a favor and show them what it's like being dead, mostly in hopes that Gabe will shut-up about his life for a while. He takes them to a dumpster and tries to get them to move something. Russ is a bit of a natural, only held back by his 7 year old muscles. Gabe can't even lift a newspaper. Crossing the border enough to interact with the living is too hard for him as he holds far too much connection to his life; he confines himself too much. Grant
1st Draft - Gabes Girl1st Draft - Joe McGrory
Story Outline - Jan 25, 2011
Gabe wanders off from Grant and Russ and begins watching his (ex?) girlfriend continue on with her life. When Grant finds out, the two start fighting about forgetting about their pasts or holding onto it as long as they can. Meanwhile, Russ is making his own adventure notes in his book.
The trio are all hanging around the water tower in the center of town. Grant is helping Russ map out where to venture off to next in his notebook as Gabe sits below, dissatisfied. As Russ starts getting excited about his future adventures, and mentions how his mom would be worried, Gabe wanders off alone. Grant gets suspicious and he and Russ follow him stealthily.
Russ and Grant tail Gabe through the suburbs to an apartment complex where he sits on the fire escape watching longingly at his old girlfriend as she sleeps. Grant tells Russ to stay behind, and he sits and opens up his notebook. Grant confr
Life After episode premisesLife After.
Gabe died several months ago and has been "living" among the living since. Unable to move on from his past life, he trapped himself in his home town, watching his friends and family move on without him. That is, until an old southern man named Grant comes in and tries to force him out of it, pushing him to embrace his death and forget the living. The two butt heads until a small boy, Russ, dies and joins them in this new ghost-world. With just the 3 of them, they have to figure out their own psychosis, why they're there, and get by without re-killing each other.
"Ghosts Do Things"
Grant Tries to push Russ and Gabe into understanding their powers as ghosts better, getting them to push their limits: Standing still as cars drive through them, move things to screw with the living, and so on. Russ is a natural, but Gabe is having some trouble letting go of his previous life limitations.
Grant catches Gabe watching his (ex?) girlfriend continue to live her life. Unab
pray into my collarbone
let your snake tongue slither
with the syllables.
i wish for soft-chested nights,
and the trickle of champagne down crystal glass.
poppy-lips, lull me to sleep,
nurse my coiling tongue with yours;
tap my scalp like a silent drum,
and wind my hair in between your fingers
like broken guitar strings.
(serenade me with the buzz of pollen in your kiss.)
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